Black Poetry : Breathe into Life!

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  1. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Breathe into Life!

    Breathe into life's joyish woes and dreams for the outcome will only make you scream.
    Screams of tanamount gone sour to milk its way into sweet surrender.
    Obvious oblivion lays its claim, to demand its calm blanket of sweat, sweat so heated against the skin, sings of songs, long ago died and never to be remembered.
    Breathe into life all who can, take it by it's throat and never let it go again. Remember the times when it brought you pain, cherish the times it gives you joy.
    Breathe into life all who can, life will never be this good again, make it your throne for only you can sit.
    Breathe into life all who can for the wonders of life is so good again, walk against the wind and let it roar, feel the cold and don't shiver.
    Grab the trees and see the sun, smell the fresh begginings of winter won, bring the kids and let them see.
    The miracalous breath infront of me.
    Hold the man so so dear and never let him leave again, remember the years against the mad and make him happy, never sad.
    Jump out of bed after you kiss and look outside and say god bless.
    Open your heart and live again, make it special just you and your friend, friend so loyal against your skin, never stopped breathing even when you did.
    Breathe into life's wonderful plan, never let anyone rob you of it again.
    Breathe Breathe Breathe Breathe!
    Breathe the essence of lifes little plays and take the journey unafraid.
    Breathe into life all you can for one day you won't be able to, do you understand,Breathe!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Majestic & Heavenly...


    ...You breathed..."life"...into this flow
    and made these words speak to
    your reader....

    Flow on poet...and be sure to
    pay the love forward...

    Peace, Love & Blessings,
    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    every breath taken u created a gem in the blow of breath
    very nicely done
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a wonderfully positive flow. Never taking anything for granted, I love how you write of soaking up every ounce of life and reveling in it. :)
     
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    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is such a wonderful piece,
    I really enjoyed reading, for you have
    a beautiful vibe!
    "KEEP EM COMIN"..1
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You for your inspiration and give all of yourself , for i must feed upon the manisfestations of adrenalin that flows threw the valley here.
     
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