Quiet Poetry Lounge : breath*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Jun 24, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    petty air grasped for--
    every breath gasps more--
    one can't even ask more--
    than to be touched by the thought of you--
    my mind
    sees you and starts--
    kicking cloud nine--
    rising past past cloud ten...
    faster than the speed of love--

    ascension is delightful--
    when it comes from you--

    every breath i take--
    reminds me of how much i need you--
    i need you
    like i need to
    breathe.
    you
    are
    my
    breath.*

    Sean Gregory Perkins

    Copyright ©2001 Sean Perkins
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thepoetsean

    In~hale

    Ex~hale

    breathe in slowly --- and... release

    Repeat .

    In~hale

    Ex~hale

    breathe in slowly --- and... release


    Sean ~ what beauty is consumed and delivered through the verses you write ~

    Excellente amigo!

    Oneluv.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BREATH

    AND FEEL THE CAPTURED AIR
    INHALE
    EX OUT
    BREATH
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$ and N2

    thanks for the read.

    (kudos back atcha)

    twotalents

    sean.
     
  5. KentuckianKween

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    i'm diggin this, man... on a spiritual level... the simplicity of this piece i think is what makes it so profound... brutiful :)

    --kweenie
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean, i got one word for you on this piece heyah: beautiful. yes, indeed...it is. as usual, there you go again inspirin' me to write, dear friend.

    ~~~simplydivinelovepoetry~~~
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    exhaling...

    if she only knew y'all...


    sean.
     
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    love is deep...

    as is this piece of peace.

    thanks for sharing.

    One.
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    seangregory

    absolutelybeautifulanddon'tbesurprisedifshealreadydoes.





    One
     
  10. blackstar

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    BREATHE BABY BREATHE

    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
    :heart: THE BEAUTY OF EVERY WORD DRIVES ME TO HOLD MY BREATH AS I READ EVERY LINE. U TRULY HAVE A WONDERFUL WAY WITH WORDS. PLEASE PASS THE TALENT. POETRY SUCH AS THIS ONLY ADVOCATES MY REASONS FOR ALWAYS PROCLAIMING YOU AS SUCH A SWEETHEART. :heart:
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: