Black Poetry : breath without winds...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Aug 7, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no secret or stability
    all so
    suddenly... society spirals my soul
    in its systematic sway of
    worldwinds waging war with my will
    weaving it in wailing walls of
    whats
    wheres
    whens and
    whys a.k.... the cardinal and compass wisdoms of winds' ways worked by whites configures its code
    controlling wealth
    and power without caution
    critically coiling our community in politically and chaotic
    charged currents and conclusions are catastrophic and pending
    as l ask
    the Creator to personally pass these series of winds and planes from the poor and unto the proud who plot to take peace
    and prosperity from my peoples path b/c right now...
    we have ******* in positions
    but we seem permanently patterned to plunder in self..... seeking
    as storms
    and tornadoes and leave me scars...
    l seek a breeze to beam from bitter-ends of time to bring our boys to manhood being so they can
    bury bizarre books they wrote of us beneathe dirt and grass blades which still bar us from becoming what the blood of our ancestral beings beckoned and not blunts and bentleys
    ceasing
    the winds
    and finally catching our breath.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my brutha u have written a true reality piece
    i so love this one it speaks so clear as we catch breath
     
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    excuse my french, but Dayum... my soul enjoyed this read!
    scribeaboutit jh!

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    J’hiah
    I read this repeatedly and your observations, concerns,
    and pending conclusions of the winds of chaos that
    surround our people……..seared my soul.

    This poem is a reflection of the concerns that I have
    as well about the state of “us” as a people in this
    world/country today. I could go on…

    This was very conscious and true…
    I pray the message be heard.

    :spinstar:Feeling,
    Angelic ps. You really wowed me on this!
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop:WHOA THIS WAS SOME ISH!!!:jawdrop:

    This was a very powerful message, and the way it flowed blew my mind.

    THIS WAS OFF THE CHAIN. YOU GET MAAAADDDD PROPS ON THIS PIECE!!!!

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
  6. Justerika

    Justerika Active Member MEMBER

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    This is a great piece, it really makes me evaluate my position
    on many issues.
     
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    this a wowww
    yes a beautiful flow
    lovely devine
    Peace
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx...
     
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    **** son...
    this is da raw ish right here
    tyte illiteration...wit da masterful skills
    peace
    khasm
     
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