Quiet Poetry Lounge : Breakup

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess u thought its better if I rise.
    Spread my wings n fly.
    Leavin u behind.
    But what u dont get is that I really wanted u by my side.
    We're no longer a we.
    The equation has separated into u n I.
    Now I'm left w/the question of .....
    How in the hell am I gonna survive?
    I didnt want it this way.
    U made a decision for us w/out informin me.
    So now I see....
    U just wanted me 2 b happy.
    But I was, u didnt believe me.
    And now u took that feelin away from me.
    All I have left is memories of u n me.....
    Always 2gether,
    Promisin that we'll always love eachother.
    I see u walkin down the street, a tear rollin from ur eye.
    Our eyes meet, holdin eachother 4 a second.
    I wanna scream "Why did u do this to me?".
    But instead I just let u pass on by.
    My heart is full w/all the pain u left me.
    How could u do this to me if u claimed 2 really love me?
    I guess it wasnt meant 2 b....
    Not now,
    Not 2morrow,
    Or the next day.
    Not ever.
    I came to the conclusion that love is really an illusion.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice..Don't you hate it when the break up is unexplained. Not given a reason, just a delivery of heart pain. Well he had a tear in his eye because he knew it wasn't time to fly.. but his pride wouldn't let him reply. I need you too.
     
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    thanx Hodee, so tru. people dont know what they have until its gone or they push them away. this actually didnt happen to me. i just wrote from the thought of breakin up w/someone. much love :)
     
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    tyte scribe....
    glad to see you back from
    da archives...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin dis most just don't know til da well run dry
    speak on
     
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    Funny how what u write eventually becomes true.although the decision was mutual.
     
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    Never know what life can bring us. Mutual or no, it hurts, just like you depicted in this piece so well. Sorry sis.
     
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    Sometimes being so hurt thats all it becomes
    Or was it in the first place?

    Tight Sis
     
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    although

    i NEVER had real "love"

    i don't see it as an illusion

    it all depends who your dealing with

    but in a world we nobody is suppose to trust each other

    a world of pimps and playaz how can that be

    have faith it's not an illusion

    the people we seem to experience are the illusion

    peace poet
     
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