Black Poetry : Breakup(from the archives)

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess u thought its better if I rise.
    Spread my wings n fly.
    Leavin u behind.
    But what u dont get is that I really wanted u by my side.
    We're no longer a we.
    The equation has separated into u n I.
    Now I'm left w/the question of .....
    How in the hell am I gonna survive?
    I didnt want it this way.
    U made a decision for us w/out informin me.
    So now I see....
    U just wanted me 2 b happy.
    But I was, u didnt believe me.
    And now u took that feelin away from me.
    All I have left is memories of u n me.....
    Always 2gether,
    Promisin that we'll always love eachother.
    I see u walkin down the street, a tear rollin from ur eye.
    Our eyes meet, holdin eachother 4 a second.
    I wanna scream "Why did u do this to me?".
    But instead I just let u pass on by.
    My heart is full w/all the pain u left me.
    How could u do this to me if u claimed 2 really love me?
    I guess it wasnt meant 2 b....
    Not now,
    Not 2morrow,
    Or the next day.
    Not ever.
    I came to the conclusion that love is really an illusion.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How many of us can relate to that?
    Don't make me get misty over here thinking
    about stuff.
    Good job
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    letting it all flow i see
    tyte drop i hear ya
     
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    Oh goodness yes, I can relate to that most definitely. Esp the eyes meeting and the things left unsaid part. You have come with the truth here, sarcasm.
     
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    This was a nice flow poet
    You really open the book
    Of yourself on this one
    Much Love Poet
     
  6. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx trantrum...i forgot i even wrote this poem. this actually didnt happen to me, i just put myself in that situation! one
     
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    man this how i feel sometimes flo on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we can't convince folks that they are indeed loved. Perhaps they are lacking something within themselves. Well written piece poet.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u really let it all out on this one.
    sometimes it's hard to convince
    miserable people u're happy because
    they are not happy.
    love this,poet.
     
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