Black Poetry : BREAKING UP WITH A ANSWERIN MACHINE

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey! How You Doin'?
    Yeah it's me again.
    My world is falling apart.
    I just really need a friend. Yes I still love you.
    No doubt about that.
    I think you just need some time to sit back and relax.
    So yeah.
    Here we go.
    We're goin' our separate ways.
    Wait. Before you go I have a couple of things to say.
    I don't want to hold you back
    from being where you wanna be.
    But I think where you belong is right here with me.
    Yes I understand I can't dictate your life.
    Silly ol' me had plans of being your wife.
    But dammit its my fault for falling so deep.
    Wait no its your fault for being so sweet.
    Then again ist my fault for not putting it to an end.
    But its also your fault for making me fall in love
    with you again.
    So if this is what you want and this truly has to end.
    Lets not end it on a bad note.
    Remember you can always call me on the phone.
    So heres my goodbye.
    I told myself I wouldn't cry.
    But how can I hold it in.
    When your the only one I've ever been in love with.

    *BEEP*

    :insane:
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many times i have heard the beep....keep keep ,doin ya,thing thing,Blatina.......i like this....creative...
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL.. MAYNN.. THE SACRIFICE OF COMPANIONSHIP TO SAVE YOUR sanity.. good job poet....
     
  4. sexyblack2049

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    keep it gangsta

    Yo ' ana u know u my gurl and that **** was hot. keep doin your thing. because can't nobody else do it like u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i've heard it so much i can't think
    Beep !!!
    there it goes again tyte drop poeticly
     
  6. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Breaking Up

    :terrific: I like this poem.
     
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