Black Poetry : BREAKING NEWS

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  1. MacGeo

    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    BREAKING NEWS
    I went crazy;
    And i decided madly;
    Cause of the things i hear;
    And not the things i bear.

    Ooh, i gave audiance to rumour;
    And a blind eye i gave to facts;
    Intoxicated was my mind by friends.
    Friends i called best.

    Oooh,nothing but jealoused minds i've got ;
    All in the name of friends;
    Every night and day a message for me;
    That the one i love, loves another.

    That she sleeps and dines with another;
    Bad news is every news i've got;
    And sadness my daily meal;
    Now she's gone to party with another.

    And together they've got a photo;
    It's sunday afternoon 'n with her i've diner;
    But i wait and waste to no avail;
    Even as darkness now approaches.

    She is nowhere to be found;
    Now i know off my hands she slips;
    And each time i think of her ;
    The world becomes bitter.

    Cause in love i can feel her scream;
    Ooh, screaming in the arms of another;
    Yes; i feel her whispering in his ears;
    And the almighty songs of love she sings.
    A thousand things i thought in me.

    And i feel like hell in me;
    And my heart,i can feel it burning in anger;
    Ready to endure the unendurable;
    It's just like a dream,i can't believe it's happening;

    It's dawn and i can hear her voice calling;
    And inn, she walks like a victorious queen;
    Oooh,i can smell death now;
    Each time i set my eyes on her;

    **** it now;
    I see nothing but a manifesto of evil;
    The shePelican,with monstrous looks;
    A devils incarnate,daughter of Jazebelle;
    Where were you yesterday?

    Please live my life in peace;
    The decree that binded us is now nullified;
    You turned my life into chambles;
    Why?w-h-y? She cried.

    It's too late 'n i've got no time to listen;
    And now that the truth is known;
    I know a mad decision i've taken;

    Because of friends i went crazy;
    little do i know that a suspicious lover;
    Is the sole destroyer of his own peace;
    No, No,N-N-N-O,a hastey decision i've made.

    OOoooh,baby-girl forgive me;
    I wish i could play back our past;
    Then i can show how much i care;
    But of blessed memory are those days.

    Now i have learnt a lesson;
    A sound lesson of my life;
    That he who believes in rumour;
    Shall duell in the bitterness of sorrow.

    MacGeo
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep flow weel felt and heard .......tyte scribe
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa...MacGeo, this was passionately exploding with emotion
    racing through each stanza...I felt pain and anger...regret
    this was a very moving piece...and the message was equally
    as deep...

    I'm speechless...
    Incredible flow!
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    word son...
    this story is so [email protected] true
    some friends will try to snatch
    happiness right from unda you...
    tight scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so true..
    i was on every word...
    nice flow..
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so tyte....
     
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