Black Poetry : Breaking Habits

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Duplicating behaviors
    that keep me
    hooked and I don't
    want to repeat
    making mistakes

    Loving without receiving
    Believing when actions
    are farther removed
    from the truth
    than from
    where I stand

    Oh.

    I'm in the same
    situation again...

    Over- again, over - again

    What is the cause
    that formed
    underneath
    the grassroots
    Unhealthy aromas
    of one man
    that like dandelions ~
    must be cut
    at the
    base of the root
    or they will
    continue to grow

    Weed - Be Gone
    from my mind
    and make room
    and make room
    for a
    new garden

    I've got to "unlearn" YOU.


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. PhWbrown

    PhWbrown Member MEMBER

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    Ok D~

    did you have to 'go there' with the dandelion thang-- cuttin' them up at the root... LOL!

    All jokes aside, I hope you aren't referrin' to me!???? Are you????
    LOL
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PhW

    You are silly!! And no this isn't referring to you at all... How ya' been Boo? Where ya' at -- where ya' at, that's what I wanna know.

    Thanks for the comps and for reading ME!

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    A learned behavior this thing called love
    no classes needed just the experience
    of harvesting and digging in a garden of
    gardenias that sometimes evolve N2
    dandelions that spread that "tingly"
    feeling up and down your spine, mouth watering
    sensations in an elevator / a sexual incline / ation
    that is stirred by a vibe from reading the book
    of extascy that plants vivid visions of growth
    preventing the affects of "We'd Be Gone""

    fertilizing absence

    leaving the soil sometimes called "black nurturing body"
    empty waiting for the spread of these "dandy-lions"


    hmmmmm....your piece was tight queen N2

    one love,blak
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well alright now! Where's he at???? I want him now!! LOL


    Thanks for dancing with me a bit on this piece... U know I love it!


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