Black Poetry : Breaking Bad Habits

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    detective #1 :

    he wasn't lying to his sleuth

    he was crying to his sleuth

    detective #2 :

    so what's the tie-in to his sleuth

    detective #1 :

    i'm not denying it's the truth

    that he was flying with his sleuth

    i'm just supplying it's the truth

    she was denying to his tooth

    that she was sweet

    detective #2 :

    that must have been some feat

    look at this

    [showing her picture]

    detective #1 :

    no wonder he was trying so hard

    her personality was covered with Butterfingers and Whatchamacallits ..... ?

    detective #2 :

    that too

    and Baby Ruths

    and other qualites guys consider neat

    detective #1 :

    what was his personality covered with

    detective #2 :

    huh?

    detective #1 :

    his personality …. what was it covered with?

    detective #2 :

    i don’t know but i can check

    later

    you’re not going to believe this

    hands him the photo

    detective #1 :

    Snickers …. ?

    his personality was covered with Snickers?

    detective #2 :

    and hers too …

    when they’re together

    showing the other photos

    detective #1 :

    why didn’t somebody bring this to my attention quicker

    detective #2 :

    the bigger question is what are we going to do about this

    if word gets out that we missed a detail so obvious as this …

    detective #1 :

    it wouldn’t look good would it

    i’m up for a promotion too …

    detective #2 :

    we’ve got an ocean of paperwork

    detective #1 :

    i’m way ahead of you







    love,

    eve & howard







     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the twist to eve and howard
     
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