Quiet Poetry Lounge : breakfast in bed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Jan 29, 2012.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tender is the day
    when dawn breaks the slumber
    of a fasting heart...
    awakening to the promise
    of sweet fulfillment
    found in the ripe fruit
    of love
     
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    Alyce, thank you, for this refreshing poetry.
     
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    that first eye contact
    that first shared smile
    that first hello
    the first moment you know
    you're in love

    ahhhh....the wonders of new beginnings.:)

    beautifully written
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're so welcome, 1poetsought! Thank YOU for reading! And baller.... I appreciate the love, always !!(you already know!):heart:
     
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    beautiful alyce ...

    got me peek'n out the window at midnight, look'n for dawn

    Thank You!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awaken ...........this untouched
     
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    Dear Sister Poet Alyce,

    I'm just going to invest in a rubber stamp that simply says, "I love every poem Alyce writes." This piece is wonderful.

    (smile)
     
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