Black Poetry : Break Up

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  1. jamaicanbway

    jamaicanbway New Member MEMBER

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    Running, hiding, denying the truth...
    Infidelity swirling through my mind and soul
    There has been a murder...
    My heart is the victim
    My body is weakened by the treachery that has taken place...
    Stabbed in the back by the one I gave my heart to.
    As will would have it...
    The heart is recessitated
    The criminal is given a chance for redemption...
    And fails once again
    In the real world the criminal is given a third try...
    But in my heart world...
    The second failure is the third
    For if the third was allowed...
    It would guarantee a fourth, fifth, and go on and on like my girl Erykah said
    Now, I am alone in this world of GOOD vs. EVIL
    Alone not in the physical or spiritual sense...
    But in the emotional sense
    Losing love is like losing a twin sibling, it rips you apart
    But it is all emotional
    For the emotion of the human...
    Says you cannot live without that which was lost
    But think to yourself...
    If God gave his only begotten son
    Why can't we give up the one...
    That did not deserve the love anyway...

    Words of JAMAICANBWAY a.k.a Robert Buckley

     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is... straight up, one you can be proud of. It is full of truth, logic and compassion. Seen, Mr. Buckley... Seen!

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    jamaicanbway New Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much!
     
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    :roll: that was crucial! Y can't we give up the one who didn't deserve the love anyway???

    eventually, we do, and eventually they see, but by then, it's too late......

    logic and love don't mix.......:toast: good job!
     
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    I enjoyed the whole but that ending was SUPERB! :toast:


    Words to live by!



    And :birthday:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop !!!
     
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