Black Poetry : Break Up Poem

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This poem was dedicated to an ex of mines, who chose a woman whom he only known for 6 months, compared to a woman like myself whom he'd known for 4 years. The names that you see in the poem are pseudonomical names. Excuse the explicit language in it, but I was very emotional when I wrote this:

I feel that we should break up
And I can tell you why
You`re still in love with Cicely
That`s what you can`t deny
Our friendship seems so shattered
I don`t know what to do
I always thought that you loved me
And I loved you too
I feel so **** heartbroken
I don`t know how to react
The impression you`re giving me is to
Kiss your ***
I`ve been a good girlfriend
For you that`s not enough
I feel that all you expect me to do
Is meet with you and ****
I`ll wait `till I get married
To make commitments like that
But you want it here and now
So hit the road jack
I thought we had a future
Way down the road
But you don`t even love me
That is what I am told
The Lord is by my side
No matter what you say
In four years or less
I`ll have a career on my way
You never send me any gifts
To even make me smile
I never screwed around behind your back
I`ve been solid ground
But you don`t even see that
You`ve changed over the years
That this relationship eventually have to disappear
I`ve had a good Easter
What about you?
I learned that is the Resurrecrtion Of Christ
I hope you did too
So you can have Cicely
I`ll never shed a tear
All I can say is that you let that
woman interfere
You didn`t know her as long as you have known me
But you choose her instead
To talk to and be around
And mess around in bed
I called you several times last week
You`re either gone or sleep
I wish that we could get back to us being you and me
But that is impossible
For that to come about
You refuse to cooperate
So yeah, I feel left out
I asked if you wanted to break up
You told me "I don`t know"
You still have feelings for Kendra and Cicely
And that`s how part of that goes.
You can`t make a decision
Of who you wanna have
You say `I love you` to three different women.
So you do the math
I know you have things to do
So go and do your stuff
But I suggest that we should or shall I say considered as
broken up.

The End
 
indeed the choice was made
it's his bed he done laid
one's lost another gain
no need to play his crazy game
his heart was fake
cast no love
only wanted the jewels

happy u save one self to be wedd
this a sweet reminder for the young
before they think about da bed

unto the mighty Father above
whom hold u up strong
it was by faith u did no wrong
one day u will cross again
but for now ya'll be just friendz
let one continue his feast
but in the end he will be taken
by da beast of self emotions

U did right , get him out ya sight
no need to fuss no need to fight
close da door say bye bye & good night!
is chance is done tyme for another one
a true love and respect ya wishies
dis piece was sealed with kisses of truth

Tyteeeeeeeeeee!!!
 
Nice...very nice.

Keep it movin'...just keep it movin'. As Rich said, his lost is someone else's gain...so, there's no need to :cry: or :bawling:. Lost :luvv: is difficult to deal with...and I know you must be :mad:. You felt like :bazooka: and :uzi: him. But, don't. His :spank: is coming.

Here is a :grouphug: from the Destee.com Family.

:thanks: for sharing

:toast:
 

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