Quiet Poetry Lounge : Break through

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Break through

    On the verge of going insane
    I opened the door...and in you came

    Had no intentions of loving again
    but here I stand, with a big wide grin

    It took a lot of skill, to crack this ice
    you crawled in my heart...it feels so right

    You restored my heart, now it's whole once more
    [email protected] I'm glad, I opened that door

    but...

    Now that you're in, can you handle the ride?
    of my stored up love, that I kept hid inside?

    What once was ice, is now a raging fire...
    it took what you had, to raise my desire

    I'm now sitting on, a cloud of my own
    no more sleepless nights, or being alone

    When I close my eyes, I shiver in fear
    of waking up...and you're not here

    All the pain and the rain, has been re-placed
    it took a long time comming, but not too late

    I thank you divinely for comming my way
    and I'll re-turn that love...forever and "1" day​
     
  2. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cut the check stop the presses too hot for words WOW!! I Love this 4 real!!
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Tantrum
    Welcome to your new home, relax and enjoy, we are family here...and so are you.

    thanks for the luv on this piece
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On the verge of going insane
    Look at how you touch my membrane
    When you let me in
    Look at how my hand shakes
    Gets sweaty just from the breath you take
    I perspirate just from the love you gave
    Im at home now I can relax all day
    You sleep on my shoulder ill watch it with you
    Lifetime all day!
    I used to think that it wasn't in me but it is-it is
    I have broke through the weather
    So wipe away pain and your tears

    My Queen Of Rythum & Soul Stay Blessed
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Made it through the storm and got through to your heart. But now can he bear the weight of that rainbow? Loved how you posed this sista poet.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Breakthru...I totally enjoyed this piece....

    Peace!
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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