Black Poetry : brb

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Aug 23, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I asked you if you loved me a hundred years ago and you said....you had love for me... ??

    but the forever thang... well you just
    weren't ready

    those words sent me away, in tears; clear across
    the country

    so sure of yourself ....you thought I'd change
    my tune ....

    thought I'd leave in May,
    come back in June...

    It wasn't that way, I was broken hearted
    remember what I said the day we parted?

    (brb)....24 years later...

    .... work with me, help me understand how
    you trynna play this weak *** hand ...NOW?

    you wrote your chapter on my life
    ...and I hear you got a beautiful _________! :D

    of all the things I thought I'd do...I did believe
    I'd still love you

    It's a mystery, this destiny, this fate
    now there's plenty room for us to live in the
    same state...


    I'm pleased to know you're doing fine
    but you have your love and I have mine...

    brb... :wink:


    alyce, 2001 (c)
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW Alyce!!!!!

    Incredibly tizzzite!!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like every time you speak your foreign language....we have no other choice but to gather round and hear

    *hear&now*

    :toast:
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    you even say "no" erotically

    go 'head gurl!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    you know Destee...

    this is real

    pd
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    this one hits you in the heart...
    even though you're telling him the "REAL" story, you can still hear the sadness and pain behind the, "what if"....
    your writing amazes me....

    K
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "you wrote your chapter on my life...", now, alyce, gurl, i'm lovin' it!
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this got me thinkin some thoughts...
    -7:spinstar:
    :rolleyes:
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all

    just a lil cathartic flow goin on....Misses K-ness...feelin ya thoughts loud and clear sis!

    a
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    that foreign tongue you use captivates and teaches us all.





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