Black Poetry : Brand New!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DymePlaya2g, Aug 9, 2001.

  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I take a long walk/ stop/ brace myself then sit/ imagine this, that and the other/ the width of your shoulders/ rise of your chest/ curve and contour of your lips/ unlock the vault/ relinquising the portion of me that's best/ better and most delicate/ cherish it/ never question it/ for my love is never divided/ previous mates couldn't find it/ had to hide it/ loved one-sided/ never completely/ kept my emotions folded neatly/ left to wear only on a special occassion/ your words are like fire/ intense and blazing/ rise, has risen, rose, and continues raising/ like the neo-soul movement/ my soul aches for you/ i intend to prove it/ along with yours i mustn't lose it/ i didn't choose it/ life subdued it/ wasn't expected but i knew it/ love life thus far/ one after another/ top 10 blues hits/ sick of that ****/ i want to dance to your jazzy tune/ sit in darkness/ lite up my room/ cloud my mind with thougths of you/ and make love til noon, oooh, make love til noon/ together we begin.
     
  2. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is nice...

    I liked that...brand new... a love so brand new... Yea... I like dhat...it had a nice flow too..... where you been hiding at?... I missed reading you..:confused:
     
  3. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks...

    Hey Shaneak...haven't really been hiding...i stop thru every blue moon to read some posts...just wasnt feeling up to posting anything of my own...figured the world could do without my drama and silliness for a while...LOL! anyway, missed ya! i'm getting back on point so look for me...oh and we need to get a FREESTYLE going on day...i know u wit it!


    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    JUMPIN TO DA BEAT

    BRAND NEW LOVE BRAND NEW DAY
    YESSSSSSSSSSS!!:toast: :D
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one here is tight Dime!!!! Keep this flow coming.
     
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    this is so romantic
    brand new love
    or loving in a brand new way...
    loved this flow.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Hi Dyme

    I like this....I love the way you flowed it. Nice peace.

    Mad Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$~ AMEN...u took so long with da hook up, had to find it on my own :)

    BISHOP~ As long as u keep reading!

    WILDFLOWER~ Loving a brand new love in a brand new way!

    CoCo~ Thanks for the love ma...as always! CoCo-felt da flow :)

    LOVE&RESPECT
    DP2G
     
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