Black Poetry : brand new day

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Nov 19, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i relax and breathe out
    as i left weights and tone my body
    i feel the stretch of every muscle
    as i breathe out and --
    bend and --
    my stomach goes crunch --
    and --
    with each rep --
    the clock stands still --
    i look and feel younger
    i buy a smaller sized bra and --
    i smile because i -- love - victoria secret
    and -- satin makes me feel -- sexy
    with a beautiful lip gloss --
    i place my candy coated smile on autopilot --
    and--
    step out into a brand
    new-- day
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this alot...
    as i said b4 i always look
    forward to your work..
    thanks for sharing:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so sweet and warm just beautifully done
    lovin it
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mz blackangel, rich, thanks for feeling my piece of brightness!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed sistah Queen flow on
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    most welcome..keep on flowin
    much love my sweet sister:angel1:
     
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    nice! real cool...
     
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