Black Poetry : Brake the Mold

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Amun-Ra, Jul 12, 2001.

  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Canned emotions laugh wildly
    with brown suede scalps peering closely.
    A coin drops and another forgotten selection
    spins at light-speed on the reminiscence jukebox.
    Enlighteners enhance minds and memories
    though culture demands less and would
    rather watch racing green faces rush
    from leather folders into pale hands,
    while tripping over ignorant tongues
    hoping the hospital is still open.


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THINKING!

    I'LL SEARCH MY MEMORIES ......HOLD ON!:rolleyes:
     
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    A differnt Way

    Spend in the community--Ra
     
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    Ra

    i can't lie
    it took me 2 reads to catch on

    now i feel the flow
     
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    And i the same...

    I had to read this twice...tight peace...and deep. Loving it!!!!
     
  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something different

    I wanted to try some diffferent symbolism and it looks like I succeeded--Ra
     
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    Great Work!!!!
     
  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much!

    I certainly appreciate it--Ra

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    i even had to read the replies.
    thanks for this Amun-Ra...
    continue to enlighten.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  10. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trying to sharpen my skills . . .

    . . . as I watch others on the page grow. There is a lot of talent here and I try desperately to keep up with it and grown along with it . . . sometimes I make it, but most of the time I don't, but coming back and reading everyone gives me new ideas and encourages me to grow and take a few risks--Amun-Ra



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