Black Poetry : Boxing Sunshine

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  1. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She
    has time but
    doesn't know
    What time
    it is
    Clinging to
    a past
    painted
    in shades of
    His
    Hears the
    ticking
    of loves'
    clock
    But is lost
    inside
    past shock
    So I wait
    during
    this Ice
    AGE
    Boxing
    Sunshine,
    spotlighting
    Love on a
    new stage
     
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    UL820 ... i don't usually ask for an explanation
    to a flow
    but ya know ...
    i wanna feel all of this
    understand it completely
    be where you were
    when you wrote it

    i wanna know

    this peace does that to me

    very nice

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    DESTEE-Trying to express how it feels to LOVE
    While waiting for a friend to see and acknowledge the love
    And so I call it... boxing sunshine
     
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    feelin this through & through

    to feel the love of a lover to express love
    yet waiting for them to come around in whole
    heart.....................
     
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    UL820 ... Thank you for the explanation! I really didn't expect one and what I feel reading this peace goes even beyond your explanation ... I don't know ... feels like some poetry black magic goin' on! Should I call Sista Cleo 'cause I don't think you're telling me everything :wink:

    Thank you

    :heart:

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