Black Poetry : Bouncing...Holla at'cha

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by brotherman, Apr 18, 2002.

  1. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel like
    Robin Givens
    Is behind the scenes
    Straight making a living

    Willing to marry me
    For my charismatic
    Way
    I flow poetry
    That increases business
    And she really don’t know me

    So like Mike
    I sometimes get pissy
    Verbally busy
    Out right
    Disagree

    Cause like Mike
    Phuk da money and fame
    This life’s got a game face
    So umma be me

    Giving ya’ll fellas a break
    To relate to
    What destee dot come
    Was like
    before I shot through

    so I hope that noone
    felt the sting
    of the gun
    from sons of hip hop
    and puns
    that
    we dropped

    never for the purpose of destruction
    purely for the purp’ of construction

    so let me leave
    you with this last

    “still love you”

    Robin, it’s been good
    This prenuptial relation…

    But Mike
    is gonna stay Mike
    Tongue stings
    from the bite

    Take flight in a
    Brief separation…

    …holla…

    ..not posting but still viewing and using the PM...

    ...just taking a break from the unfairness...

    ...hold it down MADD study the wordplay...

    ....see you all when destiny calls…peace and madd love
    :love:
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your flow has been madd tyte.
    one can only bow to your lyrical prowess you profess.
    Hip Hop's my 2nd or 3rd love so you're definitely not alone in that category of delivery.
    but i think i understand where this is coming from but why bounce
    dunn
    i'm sure "Robin" didn't pull out a gun.
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PLEASE READ YOUR PM BEFORE YOU DO ANYTHING!
    I HAVE BEEN IN THE SAME PLACE, HATERS IN YO FACE.
    WANTING TO ERASE, YO STYLE AND YO SMILE
     
  4. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J -it becomes aggravated assault -trying to restrict my voice...better for me to take a break from it... than to verbally swerve on nerve endings...ya know?

    Msluc -I got the message and I am not bouncing just taking a break from the boards and this undercover hating...
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bra-Man,

    Go if ya must, but trust, ya serious, serious mental will mos' def be missed!!!!

    Respect/:peace:
    GQ
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In my humble opinion, taking a break sometimes proves to clear the vision and remove the cobwebs of subjective-ism. Perception is very key. "Word choice is tone of voice" and very important when getting a message through. For those of us who work with words...we know they can be arranged and manipulated to strongly display mood and attitude. Innuendo and implied/inferred text are also tools to get a point across. However, motive is key.

    Been around here a while... and in all my observations, I can unequivocably state, that the language of love and tolerance has always been spoken up in here.

    Peace

    Alyce
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling the poet dun
    you stay delivering laced packages
    daily

    dss
     
  8. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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