Black Poetry : "Bounce Wit Me"

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  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Bounce Wit Me"

    These
    Young black girls
    In a permanent state
    Of undress
    Address
    Dis-United Nations
    With their
    Firm, black
    "Power to the peephole"
    *****
    And their perky

    "Bounce wit me"
    "Bounce wit me"

    Titties

    And suddenly
    MLK's dream
    Becomes lost
    In an ocean
    Of Homie's
    Wet dreams

    And another poet dies
    And another poet dies

    On the sidewalk
    Where conscious lyrics
    Fade with the chalk outlines
    Shot down in a
    Neighbourhood drive-by

    And the misguided bullets lie
    When they call your mama
    A "*****"
    And the mother of your children
    A "HO"

    But it's all good
    In the Hip Hop Hood
    Until
    "************"
    Becomes an official taste bud
    On the tips of
    Our children's tongues

    And I want
    More
    Than just the
    Flavour of a black body
    To

    "Bounce wit me"
    "Bounce wit me"

    I want
    Somebody
    To
    Kill the beat

    And
    Resurrect

    That dead poet


    *from the vagina chronicles*
    All Rights Reserved

    Hunter
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah

    go'n & EFF with my mental this moanin! You blew it up with pure OHH-two; sittin back, waitin for the schtuff to start jumpin ~ off!

    Ur Brutal today, sis! :D


    A
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OHHHH MY SISTER....

    i am not gonna say a thing 'cept... do yo thang!!

    Bounce Wit Me, huh??... i can dig it...
    & you KNOW I FEELS YA!! :wink:

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CCCCCCCCCCCLASSIC!!!! this piece is so **** good that I poet laureate would be to small of a title. This is magnificent.

    "10" "10" "10" "10" "10"

    one love, blak
     
  5. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all over

    this one, Hunter! Lovin it! (head bobbin)

    T
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *grabbin the versaces on this one*

    honestly, i don't know what the heezy to say
    but i'll understate it...

    This was tyyyyte!!
    oh yeah,
    i'm startin to feel this "vagina chronicles" y'know

    *bouncin*
    in the serene garden, j'hiah
     
  7. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce, cindy, GA, blakverb, J'hiah, T....

    "BOUNCE WIT ME"
    "BOUNCE WIT ME"

    Stop the Muse-x
    Kill the misguided beat
    And let the poet live ;)

    Thank-you from the depths of this intra-uterine tunnel
    For feeling me and the messagez of

    *vaginal-flowz*
     
  8. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say it Hunter...Say it all. Loving this

    BE
     
  9. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE...

    Nuthin' left to do
    But to

    *SPEAK*

    ;)
     
  10. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the huntress...

    went from the bedroom and silk sheets...to the streets, where she preach truths for the youths to seek.

    DEEP, my sistah, deep.
     
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