Black Poetry : Boulevard...Mind~$oul & lpoet Collab

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mind~$oul, Oct 11, 2004.

  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    trying hard to believe in Jesus but
    'his' text has proved your thesis facicious

    they say he's always
    around...
    through certain pages he
    can be found but I swear
    if a mother could hear her child's cry
    through her womb
    she wouldn’t bring another in
    so soon...

    but in the depths of despair my prayers have
    been lifted only to be sprawled lifeless onto dirty grounds

    cold stares...soundless sounds

    my thoughts painted a picture
    so beautiful...
    and my heart died knowing it wouldnt
    come true...
    why depress myself trying to solve
    life's puzzle
    for dreams really dont come true

    they take your hopes for a sucker...
    killing the soul within you...

    leaving you with nothing but those same hatefull thoughts
    that bult the very monster that destroyed your very youth

    i long let go of my innocence.....

    words whispered tears twisted down
    the sides dry eyes

    i give u take i fall and u rise
    I learn U grow and We give on a thin line...

    weak hearts and hard times..
    deep wounds and low skies

    i'd keep it all to spend forever On a path that
    doesnt hide all of your answers behind
    false truths and white lies

    for beneath the rugid extrior is a boy
    who just wants to be defined as...

    Man
    Father
    Beliver
    Lpoet or
    Just mind…
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was so deep and felt the wonderments
    y'all took it to a nother level here tyte collab !!!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :welldone: this was tight
    I agree with Rich yall took this
    very well posed and all dat!!!!
     
  4. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love
     
  5. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hoping for more love to be shown?
     
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    I've been down that same road, wanting 2 believe but situations changed them...

    Told 2 pray but thought noone heard them...

    Then I realized, my life isn't as rough as it could be, so I became thankful 4 the good that was in it, & prayed 4 the wisdom 2 make it better.

    You'll find yours, it's just a test and if U pass....Nothing but love.

    Peace.

    Definitely a nice piece.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunt at night using the front sight of my gun but when
    There’s a fight I run heard a glock shot my head spin
    Now making fast tracks gun task whack say what come again
    A thug I suppose don’t want plenty to do
    with a snug nose twenty two hell you can tell Winnie the poo
    I don’t bark or fart in the park somebody may smoke you
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Couldn't have said it more "positively"....I second this motion

    Feeling the words poets...

    Flow on...

    Sage
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wish I could've read this one earlier. Sometimes hope seems, well, hopeless, even in the Lord. All you want is a glimpse of it, to keep you afloat. The way this flowed....the rhythm and genuine feelings....this was quite an impressive collab.
     
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