Black Poetry : Bottled Up Inside

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Jan 13, 2002.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These crazed emotions that I feel
    Are just all bottled up inside
    I just keep pacing up and down
    To tell someone what's really going on inside
    Is really not an option for me
    No one would or could understand
    Clear me of my inner demons
    Rid me of these padded walls ****ing with my brain
    Hidden underneath the clouds you'll find me
    Reaching out to the top grasping for air
    Drowing in my perpetual ******** I am
    Fearing the truth and caring of those I consider close
    No one will ever come to find the troubles I bear
    There are few that know
    Some jump up and say they care
    Bu just as easily they weren't there
    I'm drowning and am in need of air.

    One_Love
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one_love

    :wave: Welcome back to the poetry lounge! Long time no see!! :wave:


    Thank you for sharing this piece!

    N2
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh Huh

    Let it go dog! Let it go in ya verse... keep flowin, im diggin it.

    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free ya mind da rest will follow

    open self up let thang lose free ya mind!
    and welcome back home .....da maid cleaned ya room..:wave:
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS!

    Thanks guys. It's been awhile I know, but hopefully I will have more. Thanks for the responses.

    One_Love
     
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