Black Poetry : Born into the game...............

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  1. info-moetry

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    she was born, single parent home
    spent most of her time alone
    asked alot of time where her daddy wuz
    but mommy said, daddy preferred his time alone
    U see he wuz a hustler
    sold drugs & owned a couple of pool halls
    where tha younga gansta's would come after school to hang
    & the olda hustlers would say "come here & let me school ya'll"
    she wuz accustumed to all of dat
    ask her about husltin'.....she knew all the facts
    on each and every ghetto corner
    she knew all the blacks
    & wuz respected
    by those who opposed
    & those who protected
    who she wuz ........................
    wuz exactly who she wuz
    a hustlers daughter
    caught up in tha murda & slaughter
    she would date here & there
    but really wuz on tha border
    knew she had to be VERY selective
    because of what her fathers trade had taught her
    but one green eyed cat caught her
    met her at tha club
    they rub a dubbed
    exchanged numbers
    as he showed her love
    2 weeks later they went out
    he showed up in gators
    she enjoyed herself so much after that night, the next week
    they went to a Football game & they saw the Raiders
    IN SHORT, he rocked her to sleep
    cause this dude wuz an enemy of her fathers
    & he did all this just to send a message
    Open casket, they didn't even bother!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ya'll do the math........................

    By Info - Moetry © 2005
     
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    rocket beam ..........the game is no joke
    this took me to a place where i once knew one like this
    and his story unfold just the same
     
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    And she had to die to get out of the game, and let me guess, her father still plays....I was all into the story, keep flowing as you do brotha.
     
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    dang baby, you brought this on the real.
     
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    You've spun a wicked tale ~ :dj:
     
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    peace,

    This story is a universal truth in all cities, but I hear of this story too often here in the NYC..........

    peace ya'll
     
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    deep truth told well in this poetic story...Angel
     
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    Oh my! this piece had me hooked on every word. I'm from the south so I don't here too many stories such as this one. I'm sure it happens here too I'm just not aware of it. This was a well written piece. Thank you for sharing.
     
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    good story man...
    the summation was a ghetto realization....smh

    one love
    khasm
     
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    peace,

    Thank u Angel, Ireadastory & Khas - I always appreciate your comments......

    peace
     
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