Black Poetry : BOOty Call

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Panties waived ~
    Right in front of me
    Flagpole all anti gravity
    Common sense it's a booty call

    Think hard...
    Am I crazy ya'll, see

    I turned my conscious back on her
    She wanted love in spite of love
    Run quick it's a mental trick
    Slight of hand a love misfit

    The wedding ring is here to stay
    Divorce just like tooth decay
    Real sweet can rot the teeth
    Like Miss Lady,
    Between the sheets

    Granite in macho overalls
    Go make that lassie's Booty Call
    Undercover in London Fog
    You the man... she's killin' dawg!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :ghost:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    I think many know the booty call when they see one, but perhaps they want to see something real instead, so common sense is ignored. Made your point in a direct hit, flow on then poet.
     
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    man dis was str8 forward Da booty call / realism
     
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    A Booty Call is no substitute for the real thing.
    I like the flow
     
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    this was tight....
    such a skillfull writer you are.

    :heart:
    moham
     
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    "thats a good one coach, thats a good one"- Movie.."Radio"

    I wasnt expecting this style when reading ur poem.. but i guess u surprised the heck outta me.. :drink:
     
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    Very nice write. As woman we have to respect our bodies better than to be used and not feel the love of a relationship.
     
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    "Love letters... my world is love letters" - Smokey Robinson

    Thank you.
     
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