Black Poetry : Boot Kamp

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Apr 15, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i push the pain away
    everyday
    like it don't even matter
    didn't do what the doctor's say
    figured it would make me
    madder
    like a hatter
    had me poppin pills
    my dreams steamin my demons
    out of touch with reality
    as a kid i overdosed
    whenever i could get close to a tv
    opening books to fantasy
    not really a problem
    but now on weekdays
    i'm reprimandin me
    think i can solve em
    situations in my community
    causing insanity
    so many deaths
    my mind locked into military steps
    so faw away i slept
    from my family
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    posed well
    thanks for sharing
    diggin the flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaawe...this was so
    emotionally stirring...
    tyte piece Antar...
    I'm feeling it...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well expressed i felt every line this was tytely done
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice brotha...
    :heart:
    -story
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many say that the war is worse at home, this was deep, props for this one.
     
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