Black Poetry : Boomerang

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  1. lonna841

    lonna841 New Member MEMBER

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    Out on the plains I caress you in my hand deserted by the feeling of sadness
    Mesmerized by the look of you I know what I must do
    In a sense of longing I hold you close once more vowing never to forget each drop of lustful entity
    A tear sheers down my face in hopes like I to escape the torture of regret
    But yet
    This is the road I must follow


    In my mind I recite the last moments we captured in our world
    The burn of passion that slid down my throat as I embraced you
    Trying to control the beat of each sway of my hips
    I stood there and sipped
    Never letting go of the taste of the desire that once filled me in those fanatic nights
    I loose emotion and my thoughts slip away just like the day of you and I
    I cry
    Once more I yearn for another chance but no this is the path I deny


    In three I hold you high so that the gods above can touch you with ease
    Covering you with the golden allure of purity
    Two I stretch you out in front of me measuring the distance between us
    Which by the way is reason to believe we are here
    Now one just one last time I wrap you around me breathing out the fear of my choice
    Never will I endure such pain like the one set upon me now
    Released into the air a breeze of closure pushes me aside
    I hide
    For I know I want to catch you one last time


    The clock passes and the plains call once again
    A wind like no other drifts towards the free
    Squinting I see
    Youve comeback to me
    Like the boomerang you were set out be
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woww....dis waz a tyght buh luvin piece
    i was really feelin dis, and hope a luv like dat wud cum bak 2 meh like a boomerang...naw..lol...jp
    so flo on wit nonstop poet
    frum yo sista G.A


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhh ! yes welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the home you just found wit peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    Tyte drop i was feeling every line & verse welcome lonna841
     
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    i like this boomerang effect you have on this i got the message in it flo on poet.:flowers:
     
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    Is there more beauty in the act of loving, or the faithful return of that love for more? I loved the descriptive phrases and the rhythm of this piece. Welcome.
     
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