Black Poetry : BOOK PAGE LOVE .

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    We mend closer holding grace
    midnight starz all ova da place
    our love consumes blush guilt
    as the souls mendalate deep

    Spool in da glist of your beauty
    we embrace off my magical charm
    tame in the lights of bright rapture
    so sensual i cherish u as my treasure
    feeding me on the passionate pleasure
    our fire burns rapidly

    Placing da gentle kiss our lips partake
    eyes meeting seeing a desire awake
    discovering your my suitable mate
    all we feel as we sleep is da tears of love
    cascading under our existance of hope
    til first day break as i shed my love to u
    a million way unknownly it has grown

    I leave upon you starz and da moon at night
    be your sun and day of faith as guiding light
    carry u above and beyond into my flyte
    without yesterday yet i'm here to stay
    to honor da essence of your being
    lovin you from the moment new beginning
    where their will be a never ending

    I found your love to be an energy force
    i become your hearts source
    you are my spirits choice i voice
    i'll alwayz have the mold of ya love
    and the image u pose'd i vision many times
    finding myself at da heel of your radiantness
    i so loveth u and will never set harm upon
    da face of ya smile nor heart i confess in vow
    all i have and to share my foreverness
    this u may have to hold as da key to my
    everything . :luv:
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm speechless! That was truly beautiful. Then u just took it home with the last paragraph!!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice $$RICH$$
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank you wisdom7 as you marked the book page of love .

    thankz brutha Hodee man everypage pose some kinda love
    just so few read it to know it .
     
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    re:Love

    Very beautiful poem filled with Love. :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many lines in this were simply dreamy, particularly these:
    I found your love to be an energy force
    i become your hearts source
    you are my spirits choice i voice

    Such a heartfelt flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u poetrymama it's just another page of love

    thankz watz those lines run deep and real from the page of love
     
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    Very....i dont know it was very dreamy...musical...and extremly elegantly written. Thats all i can say, good job.
     
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    humble thankz iwannabe for the warmth and love shown here .
     
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    dang playa you dropping boloz here
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