Quiet Poetry Lounge : Boo!!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Oct 30, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The thing about it is
    I shouldn't be surprised
    that I'm being fed my own
    feelings, in front of my eyes
    that I am eating my own
    words of, "I told you so".
    I should've realized this would
    happen from the word go
    But no....
    I decided to follow my feelings
    and I'm sitting here, wondering why
    It's sad, yes, but I am beyond
    feeling that I should cry,
    don't even want to really,
    what I desire is blood, guts,
    gore, and other grim thoughts
    surging through the mind of watz
    for now the underworld has entered
    the quiet peaceful lounge in full force
    Did I expect this to happen? My
    better judgement says, "But of course".
    Be afraid, be very afraid....
     
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    It's always the unexpected things that become the biggest things, isn't it, sister. Keep letting it all pour from your soul, I'm listening with love and rapt attention.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exactly, gempis, some things just plop down and knock us silly, or should I say silliER. Your support is often beyond what I expect, this is one of those times. Appreciated a million times over, sis.
     
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    Boo!! is the rage that is caged. We call rage. That is seasoned by those with relations we made. So as you season a realtion. Find a reason to add some funk. To keep the rage in the cage and trouble in the trunk.

    I love this flow Watz. You are very inspirational. What you doing to me girl? :hearts2:

    Don't you hate the I told you so words, in a voice you heard before coming into your head?

    Nothing wrong in following feelings it was not anything you did wrong. What happened is they didn't follow theirs. It was missed as an ingredient to keep things going. So when time came and it surely will. The bottom drops out the house you built. The floor seems weak. Like an earth quake under your feet. Tornado ripped your mind. Disaster happening all at once right before your eyes. You didn't expect this to happen. You didn't have insurance. You didn't have a plan. But if they sold some coverage for this. You would have bought a double indemnity plan.

    So many practice the same plan. Because they aren’t original men. It is easier to use another’s plan. Regardless if it’s good. It shows lazy traits of blood sitting still. Mine flows hot! I know how the dead blood feels. If you take my temperature its 98.6 . My body temperature will have you calling the doctor quick. Inner fluid. I regulate. My mind I control. I delegate. I don't allow things to run uncontrolled to the point it bubbles over. I will take you places you have never been. I will show you things you have never seen. I will see the life grow in you. I will stand beside you everyday of my life. Thick and thin. We will always be close friends. If you want it to be.
     
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    I am not only thinking about this piece, as I type this response, I'm also thinking of your other piece you penned this morning in the regular poetry forum. And I think it's best not to say too much when one is truly emotional, which I am right now. As you conveyed in that other piece, when love takes hold, it does not know how to let go, it remains even after "situations" occur. Doesn't necessarily mean that it is the end, but there is a strong need for reflection and communication.
    I needed to vent, I did that, I may need to do it some more, lol, of that I'm not sure. One can never have too many true friends, and I will always welcome a friend whose intentions are to truly help and not hurt. Peace brotha.
     
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    BOO !
    sometime we get hit with the wild suprise that just bang our heads
    sometime a trick sometime a treat but it happens and we feel silly
    coz we didn't see it coming !
    the real fright night .............
     
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    Booo!!!!! Back!!!! A fate I would only wish on my worst enemy, wouldn't you agree Rich? I don't take tricks very well, but those treats....I love them. Silly is as silly does...A real fright night indeed.....BOOOOO!!!!!!!
     
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    ...your are Brilliant
    even when there is a "fire"...
    in progress... :bully:

    ...the alarms have sounded
    leaving the building peacefully, j/k

    but seriously...a passionate woman
    and the gift of poetry...is a combination
    to be reckoned with...*one eyebrow raised, high*

    this was some lava...
    Sage
     
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    Boo!
    because I hate what I can't grab
    Boo!
    fills my brain when they take and don't ask
    Boo!
    never again is what we swore!
    now I got this disappointment knocking on my door
    Boo!
    when these ghosts claim to know me
    want to take my freedom and give what they feel they owe me
    Boo!
    until I can't see anymore

    I'm feeling your words.. keep posting poet...
     
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    "...the alarms have sounded leaving the building peacefully" [email protected], sage. Sometimes a poet just needs to vent, you know how that goes. Didn't expect any high praise for this flow, I thank you, truly, for seeing artistic value within it. Much appreciated sis.