Black Poetry : Bombay Blue

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue Bombay slid down with ease
    as I surveyed the milling crowd.
    It was Friday night, the night of dreams
    for lonely women and predatory males
    hoping to find love in some sexual liaison.

    Pale blue liquid juniper is my lover,
    passing my lips with ease and familiarity,
    while I canvass through my hazy vision
    looking for another dry tongue and vagina
    to share a bottle and boozy sex.

    My pleasure is in the blue mists of Bombay
    that sometimes stokes my libido and lust.
    But, my relief is in her liquored writhing,
    pretending ecstasy to wrap her lips around
    the spiraled phallus that we pass between us.

    It isn't love and barely is it lust,
    when alcoholic thrusts are just barely
    more pleasurable than trading deep pulls
    behind numbed lips and addled minds
    performing cunnilingus with Bombay Blue.
     
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    uuuhhhh ... Amun-Ra ...

    this is definitely lust i'm feel'n!

    :)

    very nice peace

    Destee
     
  3. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya mam!

    Thank ya indeed. I sent you a little note about a story--check it out--Ra
     
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    always, always, always

    you paint the feeling so well, I get the sensations...luscious and illicit...and oh so very explicit!

    yeah!

    A
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gin and juice

    you guessed the rest--Ra
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ra

    where can I get some of that ???????????
     
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    I'll have what he is having!

    Sho enjoyed the flo! Erotic and intellectually stimulating
    at the same time. Very insightful and ironically sobering!
    Watch out for that doit fluid!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ra......

    man dis was steamy hot erotic-ly
    but ya go head do yo thang!:D
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dreams of a lush

    Lush dreams for Bombay Blue--Ra

    :)
     
  10. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and sometimes..

    the "blue" mist gets kinda hazy...

    and all our good intentions are "lost"...

    boosting the libido with Bombay Blue....nice touch...

    K
     
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