Black Poetry : boi's don't cry

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  1. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    boy's don't cry but this
    boy cried so long I forgot
    to look in the mirror
    stagnant images of my soul
    leaked out on to spoiled soil

    boy don't cry but this boy
    cried so much he forgot to bleed
    only the words of negative
    do I carry with me
    Rape after rape after rape
    I am used to it by now

    this boy cried so much it
    is

    ~SILENT~
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "stagnant images of my soul"
    and
    "cried so much he forgot to bleed "

    nice job

    and i like the end
     
  3. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if you look at the title it say boi not boy there is a difference you know.... it is a very personal piece so be nice...
     
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