Black Poetry : Boiling Blood

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Nov 11, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You tried to take my freedom.
    I have a debt to pay.
    I’m told I should let it go.

    I can’t because last night it all flood
    in and the feeling came on like a show.

    Payback is a *****.
    It’s better served up cold.
    I just know what I’ll do to you.

    I’ll trip you up.
    I’ve studied the plan.
    I wrote and changed it my self just for you.
    I’ll keep you pissed you’ll want to be free.

    But you crossed me first.
    I don’t like myself this way.
    I have trouble letting go and let up.

    You deserve every bit of
    this payback switch.
    It’s my turn :bawling: fool :shutup: shut up.

    How does it feel? :eek:oops:

    To have the table turned.
    I mind my business and you’re
    going to learn after this it is
    something you’re going to recall.
    You will not cross another at all.

    See you underestimated.
    The average man.
    Never push someone against a wall.
    When pushed he comes with a mighty hand.
    To deliver the payback blow.
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thinking: GET'EM
    Nice drop !
    Keep em Coming
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa....As I read this I am reminded of James Brown's old cut The Big Payback. I see this piece on so many levels...personal payback, political payback, even a payback in life. You sound like a man to be reckoned with...this was a mighty strong flow brotha.
     
  4. angelicsage

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    Payback is a *****.
    It’s better served up cold.


    Love that line...
    this piece had
    The kind of stuff legends are made of...

    Loving it!
    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and i mean payback can be a real whewwwwwwwwwww!!
    take 'em to da bridge on dis one very nice drop up in here
     
  6. freedom Song

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    Anger is a nice vessel to expression.
    Thank you for sharing you vent
     
  7. Joemama0203

    Joemama0203 Member MEMBER

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    This is real right here. I'm gonna keep you mad until I'm satisfied type situation. Keep expressing those thoughts. People can relate. Trust me...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel you on dis flow..and this stanza have alot of power and truth to it
    flow head on...diggin ya vibe

    Peace
    Angel
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    reminds me of the old james brown cut
    the big payback....
    i'm bad....
    i'm mad...lol
    u came with it brotha...
    one love
    khasm
     
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