Black Poetry : boi down stairs...

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm not sure when we met but i remember how,
    the shining in your eyes, the smoothness of your voice,
    the sexiness of your walk, and the beauty in your face.
    all this i noticed in one glance. if i had of stared i would
    be in luv instead of a crush. you only live beneath me,
    but your presence is felt constantly through the day.
    i sit on the steps waiting for you like Tina waited for Ike to change. my shyness and worries and insecurities have
    kept me from voicing my feelings. too young you say,
    too thick, too deep. too late to worry becuz you have
    my nose open and all i smell is you. yeah, sure a few
    have caught my admiration, fascination, and determination.
    but you confuse me becuz you do not approach but leave me hanging on a thin wire that ain't worth ****.
    feelins shouldn't be this deep bein that we haven't even had a decent conversation. but hormones are ragin,
    nose is open, panties are wet, and i've growned to like you.
    i don't expect mutual feelins nor a relationship becuz even
    if it got that far you would still be the boi down stairs... :love:
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay dang i'm not gettin no luv. either i'm a horrible poet or I'm jus not liked well i guess i should stick to jus commentin ya'll keep writin tho peace and blessins :)
     
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    NGU!

    Never
    Give
    Up!
    Keep on scribing and vibing!
    1) You write from your soul.
    2) You write for your self.
    3) Enjoy what you do
    $)Forget about everything else!
    And the rest will come in time...
    U feel me!
    I been there and I kept scribing , til somebody stopped and heard my words...
    Blessings On ya House!
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u good poet, dont stop writin..........its the worst to like someone who lives in the same buildin..lol i know :)
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Love in vibe

    love in vibe
    i feel ya scribe
    please don't hide

    ya flow is real
    if looks could kill
    ya wordz would be dead
    many see yet to say
    but ya $$RICHNE$$
    here to stay

    one so whom pose ya heart
    open up do it from da start
    let him know how u feel
    never know it could become real
    i feel da pain
    i heard ya cry
    now tyme to come up with me and fly
    take dis flyte unto me tonight
    surely i'll make it alright

    I hear u , feel u
    never drop ya pen
    keep flowin from deep within
    if i could make dem panties wet
    they be off dis u bet
    but he will see da love of thee
    keep writting u will see
    :heart: :love: :heart:
     
  6. felicity

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    i think your poem was wonderful...keep on writin...it can only get better
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS!! all of ya'll i'm bout to cry so much luv bein givin I'll keep writin and vibin if ya'll keep flowin :)

    yours truly, serenti
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed ya scribe in on high
    so up up away as i fly
    i watch and hold in bond
    i am da love sweetest son
    keep flowin'
     
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    TO THE AUTHOR OF THIS POEM....WHAT ARE YOU TALKIN' ABOUT...THIS IS FRESH. I UNDERSTAND....TRUST ME!!! THE BOI DOWNSTAIR WILL TAKE YOU THRU SOME THANGS...WATCH YA SELF.
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ya'll fa all da luv ya'll givin me i'm so touched dayum i feel like family. :)
     
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