Black Poetry : Body PaRts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Mar 10, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved the way u said my name,
    the way u spoke that kept me
    in ur zone, awaiting, on the edge
    of every single word,
    i loved to see the way
    the lines in your cheekbone
    curves to the left when u smile,
    i lightly touched the viens
    of ur skin, felt ur pulse,
    felt ur heartbeat....

    i questioned
    the sweet confessions
    ur eyebrows gave away....

    big bands played music
    that sliped into
    the back of my mynd..
    ...humming unnoticed


    slipping...
    sliding...

    the sun played
    peek-a-boo
    \in and out the clouds....


    ur flirtatous gestures
    made me blush

    to be continued....
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    may i???

    i love the way you
    bat your eyes
    and sigh
    when i smile
    ...trying hard to
    woo
    you
    into my zone
    i love the curve of your
    neck line...that leads to
    mountainous terrain
    and a tapered
    waistline
    designed
    to emphasize the
    pear shape
    of your...
    intricately weaved
    poetic lines.:)

    let the river flow.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome storyyyyyyyyyyy!!
    and Baller addition wow !!
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller: thank u bro, for the well-felt poetry....:heart:

    rcih:thanks brother
     
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