Black Poetry : Body Marks (verse 1 of 4)

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BODY MARKS

    Your naked form is a canvas – with its’ curves and its’ shapes
    And painted on it are birthmarks, childhood scars, and minor scrapes
    Each mark telling a story that is waiting to be known
    Each mark in-and-of itself has a story of its own
    Each mark speaks of experience, of which you’re willing to share
    In quiet intimate settings … I won’t tell … I wouldn’t dare -
    Betray your autobiography, carved in flesh
    And betray this intimate gathering, each time, new and fresh


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    To see the other three Verses, drop me an email at [email protected], and I'll make sure you get a copy of this completed piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The marks of a beauty i can savior this .....awesome drop pt.2 please !
     
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    This piece is really sensual, passionate, and
    uplifting. I have a lot of body marks
    i use to hurt myself all the time when I was
    a little girl I occsaionally still do.:)
    Now when I look at them I wont feel
    so bad. Why are you depriving us of
    the other 3 verses. You should stop
    teasing and go a head and post
    the other 3. Im sure the sistas would
    appreciate and enjoy them as I did.

    Nice to read you again.
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!!!
    I'm speechless over here!!!
     
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