Black Poetry : "bodies" of love's light (pt ll)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Nov 20, 2001.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    down...

    love is truly beyond your blessed hips and thighs
    down...
    inward is how i make love outward
    down...
    until i fulfill the love in your eyes
    the sun goes down into her mind body and soul
    as she radiates love's skies
    down...
    until it's time for me to rise.......
     
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    it's a blessing

    and there is hope when wisdom like this comes in the spring of our lives.

    Say that, my dear, eloquent brotha!

    a
     
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    jah

    i just recently read this to understand its meaning..

    you are too deep:

    "beyond your hips and thighs"

    i assume you mean beyond physical contact
    in making intimacy more meaningful

    "inward is how i make love outward"

    i assume you mean to love someone inside
    out until you see love revealed

    "until i fulfill the look of love in your eyes...mind, body, and soul"

    it appears that your objective is to touch her mentally, physically,
    and spiritually each and every time with forms of verbal (poetry)
    and physical (down) expression

    however long it takes ("until it's time for me to rise") for you
    to touch her in a special way

    haikus may be short poems yet they have deep underlying meanings....

    and that's real :)

    pd
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i also like...

    how you personified yourself to the sun

    very creative :)
     
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    this one is as beautiful

    as the first one....

    loving from the inside out..wanting to get lost in her mental/emotional and then get physical.....

    her moon to your sun..night and day...as one yet different

    k
     
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    yessssss!!

    masterpiece
    masterpiece
    masterpiece
    all i can say!!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet this is an exceptional piece. I feel you on this joynt here. Keep hittin' 'em.

    blak
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pdelight,
    you're on point :wink:

    thanx fam.
     
  9. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    does that mean...

    i get an A+


    pd :lol:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx y'all......
     
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