Black Poetry : BOARDWALK

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Mar 7, 2006.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    Years past
    tyme gone
    pain last
    same ole song

    The struggle linger
    depth arrives
    feeling the tingle
    continue to strive

    Greatful for every pleasure
    with so much toil strife
    underneath these meassures
    is life secrecy

    Constantly fading out
    showing a glimpse
    leaving big doubts
    on da boardwalk


    A Dyamondluv 2006
    Nu~wave Ink Creation
    $R​
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2005
    Messages:
    3,872
    Likes Received:
    134
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    working to own my plus size empire.....
    Location:
    I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
    Ratings:
    +135
    leaving big doubts
    i say stop walking under them cloudy clouds
    let some sunshine in
    remember rich im your friend
    give you some encouragements
    im not here to spread some discouragements
    give up the will to move along
    with real friends they help you to be strong
    so you can have pleasant memories upon the
    Boardwalk..............
    :love:
     
  3. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2006
    Messages:
    224
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Tyte write, Rich. The struggle linger but it can't last forever.
    One love
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    tru dat Nevar thankz i'll take that in notion...

    skrybble7 so tru one day the light will shine into better days thankz
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Oct 26, 2005
    Messages:
    2,965
    Likes Received:
    11
    Occupation:
    Pos Technical Support
    Location:
    Windy City
    Ratings:
    +12
    This was hot poet
    Man I really liked this
    You the man you can wipe away that doubt
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    Word up Tantrum thankz for asuring me this and to kill all doubts.