Black Poetry : Blurred Vision

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticManifesta, Nov 20, 2005.

  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see the world NOT thru rose collored glasses,
    But thru the scope of my burner,
    red dots on ya a$$es,

    Student by day attendin classes,
    Warrior by night,
    putting foots in azzes,

    I got blurred vision,
    cause life is tough,
    The bull I see every day is enough,

    You gotta watch me closely,
    Cause im kinda flashy,
    Lyrically assult you with my mouth,
    and its kinda nasty,

    Because imma leave yall
    mad at me,
    B like **** d*mn
    This is a catastrophe!

    Black republican on the come up,
    Who loves eatin Kashi!
    Lazy welfare folks mad @ me,
    Cuse imma cut thier check by 80%.

    Some say I mistrepresent,
    Say imma sellout,
    Cause i want em' get the heck out,
    get a job be productive,
    not destructive,

    Old folks on retirement funds,
    dependin on Social Security,
    when they lost their savings
    at a bingo game,

    Now crying at the gub'ment,
    callin em names,
    Black people wake up,
    Social Security,
    was posed to be a short term fix,
    not a reason to go play your "pick 6"

    I see the world NOT thru rose collored glasses,
    But thru the scope of my burner,
    red dots on ya a$$es,
    callin yall out,
    bringin reality to sight,

    Student by day attendin classes,
    Warrior by night,
    putting foots in azzes,

    I got blurred vision,
    cause life is tough,
    The bull I see every day is enough,

    You gotta watch me closely,
    Cause im kinda flashy,
    Lyrically assult you with my mouth,
    and its kinda nasty,

    Because imma leave yall
    mad at me,
    B like **** d*mn
    This is a catastrophe!

    Now Wake UP!
    Cause my burna
    got a heat seeker,
    and i feel that ur
    burnin mad @ me!
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can relate to your flow poet, and I like the way you tell it...^5
     
  3. GrandHustle

    GrandHustle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece poet.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    like a grandstand.....well stated poetess.
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how you fronted this piece was nice
    even doe l can't be the republican criticizing SSI....
    old folks sayin' " hey l gotta get my ice 2 "
    and most of them republican just like you :wink:

    tyte flow.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man o Man
    Azzess have been touched
    Hot piece sudent by day
    Poet slash warrior for real
    Hott
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HI Sista Poetic
    Oh my gosh
    this is just off the chain
    Student by day attendin classes,
    Warrior by night,
    putting foots in azzes,

    Life is indeed tough
    and you got be ready
    cause who can say what is around that corner
    or on the other side of the hill
    Much love to you sis
    Feeling your drop

    Peace
     
  8. mochablaze

    mochablaze Active Member MEMBER

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    I feel you on this one. That was tyte.
     
  9. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like Whoa...........a 21st century muckraker. Very politically opinionated. I respecc it tho. Keep hurlin them, make the suckas lay low. Go Girl
     
  10. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow. flow on
     
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