Black Poetry : blurbin'

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, Sep 30, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    boom
    feel the base rumbahlin
    leave the place stumbahlin
    leave me based and humble and
    leave my face mumbahlin
    captive words and phrases
    nouns and verbs get faded
    lost in the frame
    of aims to derange
    minds that maintain
    birthed against the grain
    soundwave lengths strained
    as I bust on the cusp
    of this physical plain
    from mid to low range
    stars behind bars
    wit' chow fo' tha brain
    just how hard to range
    and scope this here strain
    and struggle with the muzzle
    in the land of the strange
    these shackles and chains
    exiles be detained
    but the captive's active
    in the midst of sustainin
    massive lacerations
    on the back of the brain
    snared in the tangle of
    falsified claims
    cruel and inhuman
    tell me who's to blame
    even as I bang
    basic cresendoes
    against the innuendoes
    on the walls of my cage
    exit through the window
    holl'in justice and peace
    crossfade the equal
    this is for my tribe
    none bribe takin' people
    checkin' fo' the sequel
    go 'head speak mo'
     
  2. Jazz4u

    Jazz4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    favo lines:
    "minds that maintain
    birthed against the grain"

    whoa
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was tyte the whole flow had me at aweee!!!
     
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    awe i like this flow all
    the way down...
    tight
     
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    tyte!!
     
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    boy...you drop this one like the Atom :bomb:

    your name should be "the metamorphic skrybe"

    because your style is constantly evolving

    Enjoyed the read....Encore! Encore!