Black Poetry : Bluejays of Spring

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bruce, May 7, 2003.

  1. Bruce

    Bruce Active Member MEMBER

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    They fly from sunrise to noon
    Wing to wing
    Spiraling downward
    Spiraling upward
    Intricate patterns like love itself
    On the dance floor called the sky
    Their movement is modern and classical
    With a touch of jazz
    Taking turns following each other
    Then all of a sudden they are synchronized
    Darting eyes try to keep up
    But their movement is too swift
    Love moves them this way
    It is their time of year
    When spring is new
    Wingspans stretched across the sky
    Their love fills the air
    In shades of blue

    BE
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Bruce,

    You paint in lovely shades of blue-

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee's poetic playground
    welcome to da family of peace & love
    this was very very sweet flowin'
    words like dis come to open mic hear & flow poetry
    live with us right here on destee
    at www.************ we have a lot going on live music too
    welcome within :)
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is so good to read your words again...

    a beautiful peace of imagery...gently flowing...

    K
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that needs to go in a marriage, love, friendship to love hallmark card or something. that was beautiful...no doubt.

    welcome!!!
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was soooo beautiful... :)


    ~lovely~
     
  7. Bruce

    Bruce Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you Poets.....Ain't Love Grand? on any level
    be
     
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