Black Poetry : Blue

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, Nov 6, 2004.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep Dark overpowering
    Pulling encompassing
    Engulfing enveloping
    Living, breathing,
    Blue.....
    Waters flowing from eyes and
    nose, heart aching thumping
    The rythm of unrest unease
    Deep unsettling core shaking
    Blue...
    Blinded by the pigmentation
    Deafened by the utter silence
    That is so loud
    Blue...
    Fighting, struggling
    Praying,crying wishing hoping
    Not wanting to die in
    Blue.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    something about da blue maze before us all
    this was well versed
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Back on top with "BLUE"

    Heartfelt!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poignant and beautiful, sister. Nice to read you again - welcome back.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u posed this well very good read...

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice flowing descriptive piece...Blue can be calming but it can also describe sadness, so true. Nice to hear from you again.
     
  7. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a wonderful piece.
    It had some very srong imagery,
    which helped me paint a mental picture.
    Mad props...1
    "Keep Em Comin"...1

    :welldone:
     
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    ...Blue

    many may not believe it...

    but it's a mood...

    before a color...

    Nice work poet
    Sage
     
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    hi thatgirl
    so good to feel your flows again poet
    isn't it something how the colors
    in our lives, comes in so many shades
    that reflect our thoughts
    and our heart
    wonderful poem sister:)


    Peace~N~Love

    BlueWater:heart:


     
  10. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice drop
    keep em coming!@!!!!
     
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