Black Poetry : (Blue Water)

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok why title this bluewater
    Cause I want to flow with a different poet everyday
    To show love for there skills and show mine as well
    Blue Water is a very gifted and talented poet
    Flow with me!

    Evidence of a poet on a mission
    World turns as her words give me visions
    Shows me a true black woman is what I have been missing
    I guess thats why my poems have sexual vickens
    But BlueWater shows me something
    I have a lot to offer a fine young vicken
    Besides sex and orgasmic convictions
    I want my mind to penetrate your soul
    I need my love to penetrate and hold
    I see my world up and over so long
    I feel the blessing of your feelings so strong
    Make my bones shake scared of this feeling
    Love in my eyes is mental healing
    One plus one is me and you
    Blue thats the math behind me loving you
    Poems trying to reveal your spirit
    Spoken from a queen of your beauty the world needs to hear it
    No white lines everything has a meaning
    No grey area full understanding is given
    I cherish the fact that I have taken the time
    To flow and show water can quinch my thirst
    Yet the blue isnt my sadness-It has lifted my curse
    Look at me now no more madness
    No more crying head in the dirt
    Love comes in Blue comes first
    Poectic joy ride its this verse!!

    Thank You Blue,

    Tantrum!!!
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi There My Brotha Tantrum
    Wow...*smiling* away

    And So I sure Flow

    It is an honor
    A natural high to feel the poet’s vibe
    You got that right I’m on a mission
    To open up the thoughts of a vision
    That what’s happening today will not be tomorrow
    So wash away your pain and sorrow
    And don’t be trouble by yesterday
    For we are blessed with having today

    I am a Queen I’m Royalty
    You are my King who I love loyally
    You give me the reason to hold strong
    And fight against those who treat US wrong

    You do deeply penetrate my soul
    And give me more then I ever hope for
    And true there will never be another
    Who I will have as my lover

    Yes

    Releasing the wanton glee
    That ignites the fire coming from thee
    To flow with the lava a quickening steam
    To set the fire, the desire free

    Come

    And lay with me
    Rest upon the warmth of me
    Feel all that there is of me
    Know that my thoughts is not only of me

    Together we will heal
    The misgiving the Corporation spilled
    They try to weaken our mending heart
    With lies, threats and misplace doubts
    So we will be ready when the time come
    To fight in the ray's of the RisingSun

    WOW

    Thank you for bringing excitement into my heart
    To reach higher then I ever thought
    To dig, feel, groove with your vibe
    Even those you made me blush
    That is he power of the sweet hush


    Thank you Tantrum my poetic Brother
    for the honor you have bestow upon me
    By Giving me that first kiss
    Of the Poetry I have truly missed.


    Peace
     
  3. caramelpython

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    :dj: Playing a duo that im feeling my brother and my sister!!
     
  4. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Poetic Blue Water

    I have given something no one is taken
    They trying to fool us I know its pork-I dont want the bacon
    Im taken nothing except my Queen when I ride
    I ride like a bandit when I ride
    She sees utter moments of joy when I cry
    Cause she knows im not as hard core I seem to be
    She knows now she has no fears of not believeing me
    Im approachable when I cry show my vonerability

    Wow is an understatement for this passion you bring
    When my lips touch your lips man this passion we bring
    Soul survivors intertwined in living this life
    Poetry our destiny without this it aint right
    If its not Blue without this I cant write
    I speak words that give your soul enough hype
    Too breath when I breath
    Open your wings now take flight

    Can We
    Relax sometimes-Old school flooding like the Jackson 5
    Make moves like this the last sometimes
    65 cadillacs and suede sometimes
    I pay tribute to my love cause her heart gone shine
    Releasing moments from our future I see you cry sometimes
    Future take you to a place were you can relax your mind

    Your soul mates do you want me now
    Soul sister I need something to keep me hi
    Your body lyrics better than sex sometimes
    The way you motivate me is like oh my GOD

    If Im down and out
    If I get put out
    If I dont have cash
    If I dont have Job
    If Im looking Awwww
    I got Blue
    I got me
    I feel the water
    Set me free
    (Pause)
    Set me free
    (Pause)
    Sete me free
    She always has
    She always will
    She always has-been my(pause)soul mate-my queen-my-earth-my sun-my all-yes yes my number 1

    Much Love Blue Water baby
    Thank You 4 The Love CarmelPython
    Much Love 2 All Poets
    Blue where you at baby???
     
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    Great flow Tantrum and Blue

    Blue you are special and Tantrum was touched by your essence. Keep the love and flow coming.
     
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    Yes I know that it is tough
    So we just got to bucket up
    And support each other needs
    And strenghten the growth of our seeds

    Tantrum I'm feeling the Love and Peace


    Thank you so much my Broths Python and HODEE :)
    Thank you my Brotha Tantrum for the love and the joy felt within :heart:
     
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    love the collab between the two flow on.
     
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    Wonderful scribes from the both of you poets, do flow on.
     
  9. Tantrum

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    Blue like my thunder no rain
    Look at them apple bottoms
    Cant offend you laday
    Been down since crush groove bay bay
    Break dance-Beat street baby
    Ozone no turbo laday
    You my sun-Brung me out of the darkness
    I remember when I meet you shakin to marly marlin
    I couldnt believe it was just your girls and you
    You look disturbed when I blew a kiss at you
    My favorite song came on-Forever my lady was your too
    I had the flyest Reebok Pumps-Best Damaged Jeans
    I was rocking guess and girbaud jeans
    You look at me like this kid aint what he think
    We cut a rug-Homecoming love look back at our history
    When I was laid off watch unsolved mystery
    You came in off a long days work and cooked for me
    I felt bad cause I didnt feel like I was doing my part
    You told me its ok-Im your bae-Everything is going to be alright
    You were my protector-Always by myside
    Never had to come looking you always cleared my mind
    I still remember your favorite color and your favorite show
    It used to be red and whats happening
    hay hay dwayne greeted rog-rerun doing is favorite step
    Dee taking they money again-shirley clean and cook-big momma gone to work
    I cant believe we have come this far and made this s--- work
    Blue Blue Blue
    I cant say it enough
    Its worth more than any woman
    I would even give up my ranger rover truck
    Just for the thought of knowing im always your man
    Reach out im here always you helping hand
    When the tear starts the roll here is the tissue I'll never let go
    When I know you miss I just grab and hold on
    Its a rush thats felt when im closer to you
    Its like the Martin and Gina-Grab My Ears I Loving You!!

    Love Tantrum
    P.S. I left the key under the mat outside!!
     
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    OH!!!!
    Loving the flows presented.
    Nice scribe, Tantrum.
     
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