Black Poetry : Blue Velvet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Amun-Ra, Jan 23, 2002.

  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wearing winter's wardrobe it unfurls before us,
    a shimmering white carpet covering the remains of fallen autumn.
    A klieg moon draws dark blue shadows from
    white-capped boughs of Juniper and scrub Oak.

    The night air nips at my nose
    and scrubs my breath with steamy cleanliness,
    refreshing my nature, sparkling my eyes.

    Beneath the white enchantment of the halo moon,
    your hand warms my thoughts as our finger intertwine.
    In the muted silence of winter's cathedral, we are at peace.
    We are one, blue silhouettes; hand in hand on the hillside,
    watching winter's garden grow.
     
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    feeling the romantic flow in here

    keep writing brother

    peace

    poeticd
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ra...this heyah is just a lovely piece written. thank you for this piece of romance.
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Denver

    I was in Denver last week and it started to snow. It brought some old memories that I shared with my wife when we first met. It made me feel good to relive a few of those moments and share them with you all--Amun-Ra

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man Ra.....

    i felt dis romantic love shared of two
    from back den and how it keep it's true
    memories of love in a foreverness.....thankz 4 sharing

    do stop by and hit my guess book ......:D
     
  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Snowy Days and Nights

    Snowy days and nightsdon't have to be miserable and cold if there is some warmth in a memory--Ra

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    Ra...

    Ra...
    You are always able to take me with you ~ whether it's riding in your car listening to jazz at twilight beneath the moonroof....or in damp, dark alleys where El Gato y Diablo lurk, waiting to plunder their lifeless victims (slaves, fallen to their vices, passions) ...

    I have seen the persons/places/things of your imaginings, experiences, and dreams and always stand to my feet in sincere ovation to one of the few who shake me, wake me, take me...
    all the way there!

    You encourage me to study the great ones, it's how I learn to perfect my craft. Thank you, Mr. Teacher.

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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Ra!!
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just A memory!

    But it was a nice one and thank you all for stopping past to read. Things are tough here at Ra's pyramid, but coming to the page cheers me and gives me a reason to pat myself on the shoulder and remind myself to be thankful--Ra

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  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amun-Ra

    You always write such insightful things!

    Well written scribe!!


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