Black Poetry : blue ribbon in the wind

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, Jul 17, 2002.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue ribbon in the wind
    Dancing effortlessly with
    The soothing breath of
    The early morning sun;

    Like outstretched hands
    Blue ribbons cross paths
    To interpret the embrace
    Of life and love intimate;

    You can tell the changing
    Of the breeze when the
    Ribbons rest as the winds
    Look for a new direction;

    Blue ribbons leap for joy
    when the new path is
    found leading them into
    another place of solitude;

    My walk is determined by
    the direction of the wind
    which leaves me excited
    when the ribbons dance;

    For I now that the breeze
    Is content with my work
    And has decided to carry
    Me into a new direction.
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin the wind right now...

    and the way you bringing it with that blue ribbon...kinda reminds me of life a bit ya know...Tyte Piece!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyght scribe Mr.D ya took me right in wit dis one
     
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    Rashad,

    yes you are correct..it is life in its fullest...thanks for the read

    Rich, i appreciate this much...thanks for the read

    one.
     
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