Black Poetry : blue ribbon in the wind

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue ribbon in the wind
    Dancing effortlessly with
    The soothing breath of
    The early morning sun;

    Like outstretched hands
    Blue ribbons cross paths
    To interpret the embrace
    Of life and love intimate;

    You can tell the changing
    Of the breeze when the
    Ribbons rest as the winds
    Look for a new direction;

    Blue ribbons leap for joy
    when the new path is
    found leading them into
    another place of solitude;

    My walk is determined by
    the direction of the wind
    which leaves me excited
    when the ribbons dance;

    For I now that the breeze
    Is content with my work
    And has decided to carry
    Me into a new direction.
     
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    What a very spontaneous walk you take. Always learning something new. Sounds like your very opened minded. Nice piece
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful walk as i stroll long side ya
    dis was very well posed
    say it Mr. D
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both...

    Purplemoons, yes i try to be very open to all around me...i am a student of life

    Hey Rich bro' ot's always good to have you walk along with me...the conversations are cool...

    catch you on the next breeze
     
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    D'Mo,

    Thanks for peeking in and showing us some poetic serenity from the garden!!!

    Always appreciate how you do what you do!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Now this is saying something!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep on blowing and flowing...... blue ribbon in the wind
     
  8. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the read...this one i enjoyed very much...

    one.
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well thank you my friend...you have penned a smile on my face today...
     
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