Black Poetry : ))@@Blue Rain@@((

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Nov 12, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm taking a brief step away from my normal way of writing and doing a little something different.

    High Peace and Poetic Love...
    Take a dip in the 'Nigrescence'

    P.N aka Satin Prophesies aka 'Nigrescence'



    The rain is falling and
    I cannot see.
    Cannot see the possibilities that I’ve
    passed up because I've allowed
    myself to live and breath ignorantly.
    The love we shared was supposed to last.
    The love we had should not have soured or
    turned to hatred so fast.
    Blue rain falling, falling, falling
    and puddling around my toes.
    Lost in the downpour; tears down my face
    and snot falling from my nose.
    I f***** up real bad!
    No trust...No trust,
    but how could I trust you...
    when I was out doing my thang and f******
    every body and anything with legs x's two?
    Blue rain...
    fall down...
    on me...
    Pour over me and cover me, yet and still I want
    to find some sort of relief, some sort of release...
    I need to be free again...free to embrace you and free to
    live in the love we had in the past.
    All the glitz and glamour of our love affair.
    Whirlwind and both of us never able
    to breath again.
    Blue rain, pouring relentlessly.
    No peace and no possibility of reunion simply
    because I f***** up and f***** over you through
    physical sin.

    Copyright 2004
    ~Satin Prophesies aka 'Nigrescence'
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done i must add ........tyte joint
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some mistakes follow us for quite some time, to recognize the error is a big step. I enjoyed this flow, still you, but a tad more gritty. Flow on..
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tight scribe enjoyed the read
     
  5. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you bruh. I appreciate you greatly as always
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exactly! I'm glad you're diggin my flow mami. I appreciate the love.

    :cardio: :cardio: :cardio:
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always you never fail to make a jigga blush! Thank you sis! :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4:
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    love the image and the title "blue rain falling"
    so clear...cry them blues...the beauty is you learned...
    and watz is right...still you
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was honest...

    down to earth humanly and you put it down poetic and for us emotional catched..







    yes we people do stupid things that eventualy ending up hurting ourself ..





    and not to forget....others
    but learn
    and start all over...
    and try to to it good the next time..







    Love:heart: