Black Poetry : "blue light special"

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by a-mere-man, Dec 11, 2003.

  1. a-mere-man

    a-mere-man Member MEMBER

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    this is dedicated to my girl.


    strong desires want retire.
    there stacked in my brain at the very mention of your name.
    sit down relax, im yo lawn chair rest yo back.
    infact let me permeate yo mine. i want to understand u in time.

    it would be a crime if i didnt know you exist.
    your such bliss
    i love to kiss yo tender lips mrs.
    Oh please i insist, i want by any means resist.
    such jubilation no hestition. let me hold yo hips and gaze at yo beauty.
    im mesmorized in this state. im captured...i fell for the bait.
    ive found the treasure your genuwine black leather.
    fair weather. i just want to hold u together................
    Man...let me catch my breath, there so much depth to understand, let me understand, iam am yo man. i am yo man let me understand.
     
  2. Zen Master_1

    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A song

    a-mere-man, I can feel the beat of this tune, I am sure she will enjoy this blissful moment.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so beautiful and what a dedication
    flow on !!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful flow...
    very nive write...:angel1:
     
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    ah wow
    this is so nice
    lovely drop
    Peace
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lucky woman...
    love the way
    you permeated my mind
    with this flow
    ...tyte
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is straight up sweet. more, please
     
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