Black Haiku : blue hue

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  1. TotalView

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    watching from afar
    the mountains and the blue sea
    rise up inside you

    full of breath and life
    let them lead you to your joy
    close your eyes and feel

    the wholeness of you
    totally complete and free
    the way He made you

    you see glorious
    is a spirit when it carves
    out care for others

    even when it's lost
    woeful in a dark forest
    floating in quicksand

    all we have to do
    is accept the branch stretched out
    letting Him save us
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tru dat indeed sis
    da warmth of believing is
    the delight of hope
     
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    ah how great is hope
    casting nets around the soul
    just to set it free
     
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    Free @ last from blue
    Yet entraped within this head
    Connection cum soon
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    again....how you do this, just the volume and quality... is a testament to your true talents. Yes, "feel"....."feel"....."feel"
    I stand in awe.
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    from ocean to sky
    the voice within me is clear
    you are the new day
     
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    from sky to ocean
    seeing my sun's reflection
    peaceful in your waves
     
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