Black Poetry : Blue eyed terrorist (pt. 1)

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  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Media pours into my eyes until logos are inscribed
    on the back of my mind like so many name brand t-shirts.

    My hands and my feet hurt.

    This poem aint black enough now and it never will be.

    blue eyed terrorist - baby killing, pregnant woman lynching,
    community burning, law abiding blue eyed terrorist.
    Retreating into suburbia from the places where fire
    burned blood into pavement - the places where flesh collected metal lashes - your terrorist actions can't be rhymed or reasoned through art.

    F U C K voting and eating together - your terror found regular towns people engaged in blood lust, killing us in broad daylight and waking up to brown carcasses the next morning w/ no conviction - government's permission - blue eyed terrorist slash Christian.

    This poem ain't black enough now and it never will be.
    This black ain't poetic enough now and it never will be.

    The average white band turns Klan w/ sheets and gun in hand when the headline ran off at the mouth -
    "Black men are raping virtous white women all across the south"
    so the southernmost regions are bleeding - cycles are repeating and terrorism is in season.

    Mound Bayou, Greenwood and Charleston
    are World Trade, Pentagon and Oklahoma ...
    and this poem must be black as hell cuz the ending is upon us.
     
  2. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could hear this being spoke, caused me to read it out loud

    am
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ain't black enough?????????????

    Chile if it was any blacker it would be midnight !
    And the moon would have fallen from the sky!
    This my dear was not written for "The Bluest Eye!"
    Go on and preach why don't you????

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lil' brother,

    this was "five raised blak fist" material. stand and be recognized blakman. marvelous!!!

    your brother blak
     
  5. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gaw-****! I am ready to leap from my seat and pump my fist in the air! WHEEEEEEEEEEW! You brought the fire and the pain with this one. Brotha you are about to set it off with this blazing truth! ****, this was so hard I am friggin Speechless! You go dude, you GO!
     
  6. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Big Bro and Fam ---- I was just reading about
    COINTELPRO and that mixed with what I've been learning
    about in my Africana Studies class about
    Jim Crow years.

    Thank you all - i hope i did the subject
    "justice"
     
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    America: Pure Heart Of Vengeance

    Happy Valentines Day To Everyone!

    We have trouble on our hands, but thank GOD trouble doesn't
    last always. As an internal war continues on the basis of race
    relations and false allegations of "reverse" discrimination, Bush and his administration have sent troops overseas to start an invasion on other allegations that could also prove to be false. Even with substantial amounts of evidence, Colin Powell must be able to prove that the nation of Iraq's intent along with Black America's intent is to rise to power to bring about "reverse" discrimination and annihilation. The truth is that FEAR harbors the hearts and minds of critics against affirmative action and those supporting America in going to war. They fear that if equal opportunity were to present itself to the oppressed, then the oppressed would turn against the descendents of their ancestors who harbored the hearts of pure vengeance. However, we would be unjustified in doing this just as they would be unjustified in keeping the descendants of the oppressed in their place because of pure fear that they might seek to rectify the past in these alledged ways. This "eye for an eye tooth for a tooth" mentality must end. In them continuing on this wreckless path from the past, America would be no better than its ancestors or Osama Bin Laden. When has two wrongs ever made a right? As the author of a poem entitled "Queen Of Hearts", I dedicate it to the United States Of America who won't allow poets of the world to congregate with one another to achieve world peace, love, and understanding. The truth is that we're all in the same boat dealing with the same issues.

    -PoeticDelight
     
  8. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hear , hear.such fierce words should be spit forth so that they can burn and cremate THOSE that dare terrorize us.
     
  9. j'hiah

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    whoa!!!!!!!

    this must stay afloat on top...

    straight bomb classic :toast:
     
  10. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks bro J'hiah -
    and I do agree w/ Poe completely.

    Cindy - I take it that you are white - although I do believe
    that all white people have benefited from racism
    and oppression - I can't front on a righteous person being
    righteous , thank you for your comments.

    all else, I appreciate it.
     
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