Black Poetry : BLUE CRUSH

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Aug 5, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Blue Crush my loveth
    When ya heart feelin blue
    my open love to comfort u
    when ya mind feel weak
    my whispers to say how unique
    when yo soul become in fear
    my warmth caress and very near
    i am the blue crush to your needs
    and the tear stopper a gentle creed
    the compassion of yo plea
    and the mix to ya sweet when u feast
    i'm yo morning sun , midday blessing
    and your nightly confession

    When u feeling blue
    all crush don't know what to do
    i'm the one just for u
    to mesmerize ya bedroom eyez
    hypnotize u to a peak suprise
    tell u how treasured u are
    and uncover the crush inside
    turn ya misty blue
    to a rainbow float
    sho u love like never before
    take it deep to da core
    won't stop just give u more
    re-route ya heart in gleam
    make u feel like it's a fairy tale dream

    bring u affection so divine
    cast by desires of no mankind
    wrap u in rapture of my bliss
    seal ya fate wit my magical kiss
    what seem blue will renew to joy
    i'll be yo personal maze not ya toy
    blue crusher the romancer
    as we sail in radiant glow
    dance cross the million dollar flo
    make u scream , holla for mo
    i'll be ya show whatever u want
    i'm willing to go , whatever u need
    i'll fulfill do it how u like , it can be
    day or night , liplock if u like
    drop down low to whatever's in sight
    prance in da moon light ya my star
    blinging in my heart so unique & meek
    so let the crusher kill what's blue
    and sho u how i can love too ......... ;)


    A Dyamondluv twisteffect
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    2005 $R........................
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue Crusher doesn't sound like a player he just crush alot!

    Nice drop brother $$RICH$$.
     
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    bring u affection so divine
    cast by desires of no mankind
    wrap u in rapture of my bliss
    seal ya fate wit my magical kiss
    what seem blue will renew to joy
    i'll be yo personal maze not ya toy
    blue crusher the romancer
    as we sail in radiant glow


    WOW that's so cute...lol....very creative with your use of words...i love when poets challenge themselves with the use of words....and you did that very well... good job :)
     
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    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what more can i say about blue crush than waht you put today rich?
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz HODEE man the crusher wants a lot ....lol

    Thankz Mzpoetic i try to create waves differently with use of words
    that express what i'm saying or going with a poem poeticly thank u
    happy u enjoy this blue crush ................

    Thankz Froggy i guess nothing more can be said u know ............
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u musta wrote this one in them polka dot boxer we were talkin about.. hmm.. i loved this one though.. definately one of my favs!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank you so much poeticmanifesta happy u like sis......
    in fact i was in them drawz u know ....lol
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother Rich......Very nice!
     
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    thank you very much sonnee01 happy u enjoyed it
     
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    I feel this I get blue all the time and comfort is all I ever want.Its nice to now someone knows the feeling adn understands it.
     
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