Black Poetry : blu-blak

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hi-wa, Nov 26, 2001.

  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when our journey begins in a dark room
    only the lights outside squeeeeeeze thru cracks
    in the blinds
    feeling almost blind
    but knowing otherwise

    seeing the glow from

    smooth..........

    .............soft......

    ...................blak

    thighs

    that coincide with

    half-open-eyes

    of uphoric size

    moans...............

    ...........sighs

    then blu sheets rest under out blak bodies
    as out motion and minds are at ease
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    of blu-blk we pose under our bodies is amazingly beautiful
    write dem wordz poet!:toast:
     
  3. onzhay

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    loved this blu blak motion pen stroke

    zhay
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice. If I didn't welcome you to the family :wave: Hello, I loved your flo. Thanks:)

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My goodness...

    You know, I'd never
    want the lights back
    on? Amazing (I mean
    amazing) imagery
    you have here.
    I'm definitely,
    diggin' this poetical
    flow...:D
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi

    First let me say welcome. Second let me say, ahem "HOTTDAMN". I be diggin this like a chain gang worker diggin ditches in the hot Gawga sun.

    I know you have more



    One
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sounds like a river i need to ride...

    ...a journey i need to take. thanks for stirring up the notion.

    may i add my WELCOME to that of the rest of the family. enjoy the playground.
     
  8. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx...

    for the luv and support folks.

    i'll try to keep ya minds open and
    stimulated with my flo.
    keep reading me as i read u.
    hit the hi-wa.
    out.
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm

    Hey Gawga Boy!!!!!!!!!!!! What part you be in????
     
  10. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i grew up jonesboro and griffin
    spent a little time in atlanta itself
    went to college in savannah
    now i transferred up nawf a bit.

    u?
     
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